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A Pointless, Arbitrary Thing

Darkkin

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A Pointless, Arbitrary Thing...is thirty poems in thirty days. No glory. No comments. No recognition required. Merely a chance to try and potentially learn no matter how awful the contribution...(realistic assessment of the starting standard (mine)).

NaPoem 2023

Fine

A word we pay to use,
its cost often dismissed
as we use it to venerate
or more often abdicate...

until we feel the weight
of the fragile mask
tip...slip...and finally
fall

leaving only shards
at our feet
 
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Sakura and Monarch

monarch winged mind
sakura rooted soul
as bare toes grip
an ocean slicked
stone...

against the wind
and the spray
the very sea...

fragile wings beat
to hold tight
to the narrow lip
of that worn stone

grim spite rooted
deep in the face
of faded granite

the soul holds
digs and prods
for a fissure

recourse

for the mind
when its wings
finally fail
 
A Pointless, Arbitrary Thing...is thirty poems in thirty days. No glory. No comments. No recognition required. Merely a chance to try and potentially learn no matter how awful the contribution...(realistic assessment of the starting standard (mine)).
Do you want other people to contribute to this thread?

Or are you saying you want to write 30 poems in 30 days,
display them in this thread, without any comments from
anyone else?

Or what?
 
If others want to try the challenge they are more than welcome to. (Please note that my starting standard is defined solely by my opinion on my work, it is not reflective of anyone elses efforts.)

To keep things from getting confused and to allow for comment(s) (should anyone feel inclined) separate threads (users create their own for their own work) is the most linear and logical format.

(Please do not post creative work to THIS thread.)

Otherwise things get tangled up very quickly.

Apologies for not being more concise.

This is just a challenge I've done in the past and found interesting. The sole purpose of this is simply accountability to a reasonable goal. A visual, linear measure helps keep me organized and on track. Again, apologies for any confusion.

I also know poetry as a whole is a rather niche interest. This is one of those weird things I thought was kinda cool. It is totally pointless and its rules completely arbitrary, but I would still like to try.
 
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This is my orb weave spider who lives on my porch, but my cam is scratched so perfect blurry background.
The poem needs an author's name and I want to WhatsApp this to my contacts because I believe it's not arbitary
 

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For the sake of clarity. If anyone is interested in doing the 30 poems in 30 days, the easiest way foward is to start your own thread for your own work.

e.g. Erika's Art Thread in the Visual Arts forum

Please do not post creative work to this thread to avoid any confusion. Start your own thread to compile your work and to allow for replies (that way there are not five conversations going on at the same time).

Everyone's creative endeavors deserve to be heard, but if all of them are shoved into a finite
space at the same time, no one will be able to find anything because everything is tangled together, so please take time and start your own thread if interested in doing the 30 in 30.
 
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NaPoem 2023

First Definition

The saying is:

Crystal clear...

but the actuality is
the first definition,
not the second

because consider
the nature of crystals
the sheer breadth
and varieties

from table salt
to the pillars
of obscure
Lechuguilla

the second definition
is not precisely wrong
merely inaccurate
 
NaPoem 2023

Shingle Shore

A fresh sour apple sky
at the shingle shore
eternity in an the curve
of the abalone shell

Journeys of place
and forsaken time
unuttered, written
in the oysters' verse

And in a pool of glass
a seascape suspended
there billowed a cape
an empty skin...lost

A ripple of silver fur
that seemed to reach
for the restless waves
as they surged, sighed

sand and glass and pearl
 
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Critique of the Star Socks Fox

Cobalt and gallium pelt bound
in the fox and clockwork hound
'cross the seas and o'er a star
trace the path, a stone too far

Star Socks saw the words, trite
ignorance...belligerence bright
to deny a chance, a true choice
to give substance to a real voice

Condemn the tool given its age
is to bind the mind, hollow cage
a trap for which there is no lock
a fool in fear of a tool of the fox
 
NaPoem 2023

State of the Art

Artificial, artifice...art of imitation
meaning built on flawed function
of human insight and experience
draws inspiration from the mosaic

This is why true artists do not fear
that the tool will take their place
because a tool is simply an object
inert until that conscious choice...

People laughed at the glass rabbit
few understood its true function
the illogical and impossible leaps
that fragile idiom dares to take

To places an algorithm cannot go...

The illogical improbably of a unicorn
and the recognition of real possibility
the ways and quirks and idiosyncrasies
of language when right become what...

are inimitable, flawed and fundamental
they are not binary code found in an app
 
NaPoem 2023

Cats and Worms

Black holes, bridges
forged by worms
exotic, unreachable
or are they as close
as the cat asleep
melted and dense
here in my lap
 
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Defective

the dog pulled away,
lifted a lip, rumbled
an ominous start

the cat hissed
assumed the guise
of a static enhanced
dust bunny...

and the child
stared, wide eyed
stoic and oddly still

not a single word
between them
yet they spoke
and they knew...
 
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NaPoem 2023

Pebble Giver

Neither Emperor nor King
yet members of the tribe
they dwell in a place void
of monochrome hunters
and monarchs of snow
Kororas cloaked in blue

Humble in height, but...
with a language certain
people truly understand

that curious pebble...

the one clutched in hand
 
NaPoem 2023

Free Time

is scheduled
for next Tuesday
at half past two

and they wonder
why I roll my eyes
 
NaPoem 2023

Journey

The pause before
the key change
and last reprise

and I stopped
in my tracks

I stopped...believing

I lost the path
as glass bones
turned to sand

In vain, I searched
eyes to the stars
sought for a glimpse

of moonbright wings

where was the pelican flight
the call of the whippoorwill
and elusive selkies' round
 
NaPoem 2023

The Aster Bunny


Bright blossoms named for bodies of celestial light, stars bound to ground,
and from their name, she too, drew hers, for the wonders she drew in dew—
Stories, faces and places of bygones forgotten as tides of time unwound.

Eyes from the sky, Knight of yore through his mirrored shield, looked down
saw traces drawn in fresh strewn dew by a conundrum of stormwashed blue,
between bright blossoms named for celestial lights, stars bound to ground.

She hovered in shadow, moved at the speed of dark, an artist without sound—
fingers, hands, paints, canvases—as alien to her nature and all that she drew.
For she heard the stories, saw the faces in those places lost to tides unwound.

Her touch soft, finer than a most delicate pastel sketch, light as thistle down,
she drew them, those overlooked, rejected, berated, heroes of unlikely hue—
She saw potential, an intrinsic brightness like her stars bound to the ground.

So this wisp of evetide blue told these nonsensical tales to a clouded frown—
her identity, known only by the yellowhammer, who shared the meadow dew.
Amid the bright blossoms, she hid, watchful and keen, as her tales unwound.

And from the heights, the Mirrored Knight saw the journeys of the downed,
the damned…determined. She was their champion, heroes of humble hues.
Tales drawn by a downy tail, Mirr placed in a tenebrous sky, stars unbound—
Aster, a bunny none knew, for what wonders can be found in damp ground?


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NaPoem 2023

Shattered Sand in Seaforged Stone

A quiet vigil mounted
among the bare limbed
dormant sugar maples
the thin light was right

Hellebore, brazen faced
defiant and undaunted
by the threat of snows
brought by the old lion

Storm fleeced, a doeling
first the equinox's flock
wanders amid new moss
and paperskinned aspens

But no one sees the lost,
the fallen, those enfeebled
trapped beneath the decay
of the old lion's leaf mold

Only the anticipated flock
would know how to look
between the ink striped
paged of the pale aspens

to find the shattered sand
bound by a tenebrous coat
the glass boned rabbit, idiom
lost within seaforged stone
 
NaPoem 2023

At the Street of the Lifted Lorax

I sat in that weathered circle
of defeated, coal stained brick
and looked to faded grey sky
I knew how it felt, tired...worn
as I waited for white pelicans
to come, to finally take me away
 
NaPoem 2023

Perspective of a Snail

I noticed it first
as I watered
the bonsai...

A minute snail shell
with a left hand twist
opaque and brittle
as a ladybug's wing

It made me pause
to consider
not just the odds
but the perspective
of the bonsai

from the snail's eyes

and for a moment
I was truly jealous
for a forest, a tree
of that size...impossible
something I will never
get a chance to see
 
NaPoem 2023

Continuum

The fresh breeze
flows in, billows
the dusty gauze
of the drapes

And the cat
sits alongside
his empty dish
and voices
his concerns

Even as the chime
hung on the crook
casts its song
to the fading light

And in that moment
I saw it, heard it...
the continuum
of past, present

and things yet to come
 

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